Lots to like here, great location filming, love the Production Company ident, effective enigmatic storyline, varied shots and good music. The eerie end sound and creative transitions plus the edited CCTV sections are all effective. Target: You need to present this first cut to the target audience and get feedback and then act on that feedback. You still need several conventions, like the final screen to give proposed date etc as that is one of the key trailer conventions. There are also a few other things that could be quickly fixed. Also , the audience feedback will be useful if audience is the focus of 1b in the exam...
Lots to like here, great location filming, love the Production Company ident, effective enigmatic storyline, varied shots and good music. The eerie end sound and creative transitions plus the edited CCTV sections are all effective. Target: You need to present this first cut to the target audience and get feedback and then act on that feedback. You still need several conventions, like the final screen to give proposed date etc as that is one of the key trailer conventions. There are also a few other things that could be quickly fixed. Also , the audience feedback will be useful if audience is the focus of 1b in the exam...
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